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Review: Broken (The Captive, #6) by Erica Stevens

15 Monday Jun 2015

Posted by Elisabeth in review

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Erica Stevens, paranormal romance, the captive series, Vampire

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*****Though this book is a standalone novel, it is highly recommended that it NOT be read without reading the other books in The Captive Series first as it does contain spoilers. This book is set in the past but it is not meant to be a historical novel. Special pre-order price will only be available for a limited time after release.*****

In The Captive Series the vampire king that decimated the human and vampire races was introduced, but now it’s time to meet the man that existed before he became a tyrannical king.

At twenty-five, Atticus is the last surviving member of the most powerful line of vampires, and is known as a prince amongst his kind. The life of luxury and privilege he’s always known is about to change in ways that he never could have seen coming though. Ways that will forever alter the course of his life, the lives of all those around him, and the history of the world.

With his life shattered and an all-consuming thirst for revenge the only thing keeping him going, he is left with only one realization…

Sometimes what rises from the ashes of a broken man, is a monster.

Mature YA/New Adult. This book contains some language, violence, and sexual situations. Recommended for ages sixteen and up.

Edited by Leslie Mitchell at G2 Freelance editing.
Cover art by ebooklaunch

Blurb and cover from Goodreads.

3 out of 5 stars

It hurt me to slap on those 3 stars, it really did. I love this series as well as the author’s other vampire series, but this one just…fell flat on its dear little face. The previous book, Redemption, was without a doubt the best in the series, so I had high hopes for this one, but…I felt as if there was something missing from the story.

The plot:

Technically, this is book 0.1 in the series. It takes us back roughly 900-and-something years to medieval England where Atticus, known only as “the king” through most of the earlier books, is a young vampire aristocrat barely in his twenties. He meets and bonds with a young peasant vampire, Genevieve or Genny, and we learn how deeply the series’ villain once loved. This is an exploration of how Atticus became as warped and twisted and psychotic as he did, breaking your heart into tiny little shards by the end.

The better part of the book is the last quarter or so, in my opinion. It felt to me like there wasn’t enough conflict and suspense in the early part of Atticus and Genny’s relationship. Yes, there were obstacles, but they seemed to overcome them too easily. Also, I thought it was cheating for the author to have them making out within the first few chapters. One should draw it out! Build up to it until there is no choice!

That lack of early conflict was my main objection. I thought there was so much potential with the various characters and their subplots to make things go wrong, but none of those juicy veins were tapped. I liked other elements of the story, but I just couldn’t get past that.

The characters:

So yes, I did feel horrible for Atticus by the end. We spent the first five books in this series hating his rotten guts, but then the author apparently decided it would be fun to make us cry for him. In his youth, he was very much like the hero of the first four books (who is also his son). Something Atticus himself notes in his journals toward the latter part of the story.

This book focused more on the male POV, but there were still chapters in there from Genny’s perspective. The story centered so much around Atticus that no other character really bears mentioning, but they had a sweet relationship and Genny was a good character. She’s like Aria more than a little in her tenacity and self-sacrificial mindset, furthering the parallel between Atticus and his son’s stories and breaking a reader’s heart even more.

If you’re a fan of The Captive series, then I certainly recommend this for the backstory if nothing else. But I’ve seen how well this author can write and I feel like she didn’t follow through. All the same, I’ll still be hanging on for new additions to this series.

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I have a riddle for you!

16 Wednesday Jul 2014

Posted by Elisabeth in anouncement, my books

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amazon, barnes and noble, fanged princess, freebie, ibooks, kindle, kindle freebie, my books, nook, novella, smashwords, Vampire

Hello, world, I have a riddle for you.

What’s permanently free on all venues and in Amazon’s Top Ten? FANGED PRINCESS, of course! Thanks to all you phenomenal folk who made it possible!

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I will not let my brother suffer the same loss…

Hadassah’s father, the Vampire King, punished her harshly for her choice to love a human. Now her brother, the only person in the world who still matters to her, has fallen for a human girl. Determined to keep the girl safe, the three of them flee from their home in New England and find themselves cornered with their father’s minions closing in. If they want to escape, their only hope may be to join forces with the mortal enemies of their kind…

Be ensnared in this dark tale of enduring love, revenge, and suspense from teenage author, Elisabeth Wheatley.

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Help make Fanged Princess permanently free!

09 Wednesday Jul 2014

Posted by Elisabeth in anouncement, my books

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elisabeth wheatley, fanged princess, i need your help, indie author, kindle freebie, my books, paranormal romance, Vampire

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I finally went and did something I’ve been meaning to do for a long time. I hopped on over to Smashwords and uploaded Fanged Princess, listing it for free. It has been accepted into their premium catalog, which means it shall be available for Nook, Sony, Kobo, and Apple, all for free! But since Amazon is, well, Amazon, I need you help to make it free for Kindle, too.

It’s simple. Just hop by Fanged Princess’ Amazon page and use the “tell us about a lower price” feature, using either the link from Smashwords or BN.com. That’s it and thank you! ❤

 

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Friday Freebie #31 Forbidden Forest (Legends of Regia #1) by Tenaya Jayne

04 Friday Jul 2014

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fantasy, legends of regia, paranormal romance, shifter, tenaya jayne, upper ya, Vampire, ya, young adult

This book is an excellent upper YA paranormal romance with lots of action, hot vampires, and hardcore girls fighting werewolves. My 5-star review is forthcoming.

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Born in shame. Cast from society. Shape Shifter/Elf hybrid, Forest must fight for any respect she can get. Targeted in her youth by a vampire noble who placed an illegal slave mark on her, she is forced to obey him, no matter what.

Slipping the grip of her master and abandoning the prejudice of Regia, her native world, Forest takes a job on Earth, guarding the portal, using her skills as a warrior to enforce Regia’s laws. Now, called home for a black ops mission, Forest must put aside her own prejudice to transport the vampire prince, Syrus, through enemy territory in a time of war.

Prince Syrus, mage and master of the Blood Kata, wants Forest more than he’s ever wanted anything. In spite of their mutual mistrust, their attraction cannot be denied. Through the danger of their mission, and the secrets they both keep, it doesn’t matter what they feel. Forest is forbidden.

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Friday Freebie #27 The Vampire Hunter’s Daughter Part I by Jennifer Malone Wright

06 Friday Jun 2014

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I read this whole short story series two years ago. It’s pretty good, I just wish there had been at least some sliver of a semblance of redemption for the vampires instead of them being TOTALLY EVIL.

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Fourteen-year-old Chloe witnesses her mother’s murder at the hands of a vampire. Before the vampire can kidnap her, there is an unexpected rescue by a group of vampire hunters. Overwhelmed by the feeling of safety, Chloe passes out and they whisk her away to their small community.

When Chloe wakes, she comes face to face with the only other living relative, besides her mother, whom she has ever met: her grandfather. Chloe’s mother kept her hidden from the family; now, Chloe tries to unveil the family secrets.

Through her grandfather, she learns her mother was a vampire hunter. In fact, her entire family is descended from the powerful bloodlines of vampire hunters. Chloe agrees to join the family she has never known for one reason only: Chloe vows to kill the vampire responsible for her mother’s murder.

With vengeance in her soul, Chloe is even more determined to follow through on her vow when she discovers the true identity of her enemy and how he is connected to her.

The Vampire Hunter’s Daughter is the first in a series of short stories by Jennifer Malone Wright.

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Review: A Shade of Vampire (A Shade of Vampire, #1) by Bella Forrest @AShadeOfVampire

31 Monday Mar 2014

Posted by Elisabeth in review

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a shade of vampire, bella forrest, paranormal romance, Vampire, vampy romance, ya, young adult

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On the evening of Sofia Claremont’s seventeenth birthday, she is sucked into a nightmare from which she cannot wake.

A quiet evening walk along a beach brings her face to face with a dangerous pale creature that craves much more than her blood.

She is kidnapped to an island where the sun is eternally forbidden to shine.
An island uncharted by any map and ruled by the most powerful vampire coven on the planet. She wakes here as a slave, a captive in chains.

Sofia’s life takes a thrilling and terrifying turn when she is the one selected out of hundreds of girls to join the harem of Derek Novak, the dark royal Prince.

Despite his addiction to power and obsessive thirst for her blood, Sofia soon realizes that the safest place on the island is within his quarters, and she must do all within her power to win him over if she is to survive even one more night.

Will she succeed? …or is she destined to the same fate that all other girls have met at the hands of the Novaks?

Blurb and cover from Goodreads

4 out of 5 stars

This is a book I have heard great things about and I have very much wanted to read for a long time and I was not disappointed. To give you an idea of how good it is, the evening I started it, my sixteen-year-old brother came in and told me I had to do something and when I returned, he had pilfered my Kindle and was raptly flipping the digital pages despite my demands he return it. I had to wrestle it back. (No, this has not happened before nor since.) He finished it and has started the second.

The plot:

This was a shorter length book that had good character development, took time growing the romance, and does not shy from tumultuous drama and agonizing suspense. The concept of the Shade and the vampire covens was a believable explanation for how they had managed to remain hidden from the eyes of the world. The book does end in a MASSIVE cliffhanger, so be forewarned, but overall I thought the story elements and the take on vampires was quite good.

The characters:

I liked Sofia more than I’ve liked some heroines. She was brave and didn’t ask anyone to save her, but wasn’t ungrateful when they did. She was perfect for Derek in that she didn’t let him get away with claiming he “couldn’t” resist his vampiric urges and makes him take responsibility. That was refreshing. Lots of the vampires I’ve been meeting in literature needed a good slap and a “pull yourself together, cupcake” speech. I did kind of feel bad for her over her helpless love for her foster-brother, Ben. More on Ben in a second.

Derek was a compendium of traditional bad boy vampire traits—tall, dark, handsome, muscular, etc.—but he does have a few quirks and personality traits like his love of piano music and difficulties with technology. It is clear the author put forth an effort to make him a fleshed-out love, multidimensional love interest, not just another cookie cutter alpha male type.

There are two feelings I have on Ben—pity and loathing. I can’t really say why because of spoilers, but he struck me as ungrateful and self-righteous and it’s horrible what happened to him, but…ugh, you’ll have to read it yourself.

Then there’s Lucas. Lucas is Derek’s creepy older brother who really, really needs to get staked. He’s pervy, obsessive, violent—yet there are parts where the author actually made me feel a twinge of something akin to sympathy for him. It was incredible. Bella Forrest really does know what she’s doing. (But I still want him very, very dead.)

In closing, a good vampire paranormal romance. I gave it four stars because it didn’t quite consume me the way some other PNRs have, but I do believe it was an outstanding piece and Ms. Forrest is a very talented lady.

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The Natural Predator of the Vampire

26 Wednesday Mar 2014

Posted by Elisabeth in character chat

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bram stoker, mythology, natural predator, rules, Vampire, vampire lore, werewolves

Assuming the vampire is the natural predator of the human, what is the natural predator of the vampire?

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I asked this question awhile back on my Facebook page and got a wide variety of responses. Werewolves and witches were the most popular choices, Buffy was in there somewhere, one person even suggested killer owls, and a few put forth dhampirs, vampire/human hybrids, that only feed off vampire blood (that was probably my favorite).

Bram Stoker to Stephanie Meyer—one of the most common consensus among writers of vampire literature is that they do not get along with werewolves. They’re like Tolkien’s Elves and Dwarves—they hate each others guts into oblivion—but they seem too evenly matched to me. A true predator has a distinctive advantage over their prey. One might say the Werewolves have the edge of going out in the sunlight, but they are at their strongest under a full moon and there goes that idea.

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I confess to never having read Dracula, but I’ve been told Stoker put forth the theory that vampires are hunted by witches. This leaves too many variables for me. You need to explain whether or not the witches in question are a separate species or a special classification of human and if they actually feed off the vampires or just use them in spells…I think this makes them more of just an enemy.

Buffy doesn’t count because she is a single human, not a race. (Though I’m sure lots of vampires would have nightmares about her.) As for killer owls—holy crap if there was an owl that ate vampires, I’d never sleep again.

A dhampir is probably the closest to what I had in mind. There is a certain irony in a half human creature feeding off vampires and if you go by the general philosophy on dhampirs, they possess all the strengths of the vampire and none of the weaknesses (sunlight, silver, wooden stakes, crosses, garlic, what have you). Marvel Comic’s Blade went with this theory.

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Tied with the dhampir in my personal opinion, is a creature that feeds not on the vampire’s blood, but their life force. I’m not really sure what it would be called or what its vulnerabilities would be, but I imagine it in human form with preternatural strength just like its prey.

Vampire lore has been rehashed and retold of late more than any other mythological creature’s with the exception of perhaps fey. Because of that, there are a multitude of versions of vampires and therefore a multitude of possible predators. This question could be answered twenty different ways by twenty different people and they could all be right. It’s all subjective to the particular incarnation of the lore. Nonetheless, it seems there should be a rule about this because after all, everything in nature gets hunted by something. Why would the paranormal world be any different? This might just be something to address in my Fanged Princess series…

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Review: Ashes, Ashes (Tales of the Enchanted Forest, #0.5) by M.A. Bronson @enchantedmab

03 Monday Mar 2014

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ma bronson, novella, paranormal romance, Vampire, ya, young adult

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Ten years ago Jay Jay Grayson’s life changed forever. Too bad she can’t remember anything that happened that night. She later learned that both her father and sister had died. Ever since then, as soon as it gets dark she is visited by her strange friend William.

William is a vampyre with a dark past, a large ego and secrets that could destroy them both. As her relationship with Will deepens a hidden enemy draws closer.

Sixteen-year-old Jay Jay must uncover her true power and discover the truth of her past if she is to have an hope of a future….

Blurb and cover from Goodreads

5 out of 5 stars

At the beginning and about up to the halfway point of this story, I was thinking it would be a four star book or thereabouts. But the last fifty percent got me so involved and so fixated on the characters and the outcome and the world…when I dropped by Goodreads to give it a rating, it just felt right to go with the whole five. There were a few typographical errors, little things. The language was a little more consistent with High or Epic Fantasy in the beginning—not really sure if that’s a bad or good thing—but that gets smoothed out by the second chapter. The author was sixteen when she wrote this and I think it was her first title, but I’m not sure. I do know is it’s much better than my debut novel and so hats off!

The plot:

This is a novella and a lot happens in a short space of time. We get a glimpse into Ms. Bronson’s reality that tells us just enough for it all to make sense and a little extra as a tease. There is this one part where we get a brief snapshot of what I believe will be MC’s of the other books—a werewolf’s mate, a half-elf girl, and a dragon (oh, yes, yes, yes, bring on the dragons please!). The ending was left a bit open, which is better than the conclusion I was dreading, but there is still a huge question as to whether or not things will turn out the way I want them to for the MC’s of this book.

The characters:

It’s been awhile since I’ve read about a punk-rocker type MC. Despite Jay Jay’s lime green highlights, brow and lip rings, she wasn’t the unbearably haughty rebel I’ve come to expect. I liked her a lot and I do hope we get to see her in the later books (we probably will, but authors have been on a role breaking my heart since the start of this year).

I didn’t really feel like there was a necessity for her clique of friends that appear in one scene at the beginning. Yes, it was important to establish the dynamics of Drew and Jay Jay’s cool romance, but I think it might have been possible to do that without the friends.

Will, the vampyre, is a big part of the story from the prologue. I was rooting for him and I’m really, really worried what’s going to happen now that things are the way they are. (When a questionably sane vampyre seeress offers information in exchange for somebody’s death, you know you’ve got to tread carefully.)

I enjoyed this short book very much and I can’t wait for the release of the rest of the series!

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Writing Update: January 2014

22 Wednesday Jan 2014

Posted by Elisabeth in anouncement, my books

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argetallam, argetallam saga, daindreth's assassin, epic fantasy, Fanged outcast, fanged princess, fantasy, indie author, indies, novella, paranormal romance, series, summer 2015, Vampire, writing, writing plans, ya, young adult

The other day, I was getting mad because a few authors whose work I’ve enjoyed have failed to offer updates on sequels. Then I realized—I haven’t given updates in awhile and it was time to fix that!

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2013 was a big year that began with Fanged Princess’ release, followed by The Chalice of Malvron, and ended with Fanged Outcast, the sequel to FP. I completed the first drafts of books 4 and 5 in the Argetallam Saga as well as the premier novel in a new Epic Fantasy Romance series that has been garnering some attention, but more on that later.

My goal for this year is to finish drafting the last two books in the Argetallam Saga and publish the fourth novel in the series before Christmas. Right now, I would say we are looking at a July/August release for The Temple of Tarkoth with Fanged Princess 3 to follow a month or two later. (But it might be sooner, we shall have to see.)

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The first draft of the third novella in the Fanged Princess series is set to be done by this weekend and sometime after that it’s off to writing the sixth Argetallam book and editing my newest word baby, Daindreth’s Assassin. If you follow me on Pinterest, you have probably seen my board for this series and know that I am very, very much in love with it. It’s a true epic fantasy about an assassin who falls for the prince she was hired to kill and my goal is to get it beta-ready by July-ish and publish it sometime in 2015 around late spring/summer, but ONLY after I finish writing the Argetallam Saga. Janir’s story is one I want to tell right and I think she and her friends (and enemies) deserve to be taken care of first.

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The prospect of coming to the end of Janir’s tale is more than a little daunting, as Janir has been with me for close to a decade now, but at the same time I can’t wait to see if everything unfolds as I envisioned years ago. However, there is a certain Argetallam mortahn and a pair of young lovers who just might get their own books. We shall have to see.

I am very excited to share with you all Haddie and Janir’s upcoming adventures and I am just giddy for you to meet Amira. But in the meantime, I have some wordsmithing to do. Catch you later!

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Teaser #7: Fanged Outcast

15 Wednesday Jan 2014

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Fanged outcast, fanged princess, humor, indie author, novella, teaser, Vampire, vampires, ya, young adult

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